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Awaiting the Dawn by ~Cayden:iconCayden:



I raise my hands in humble,
precious surrender. My sword dropped,
my viciousness as a veil removed.
And I stop to smell the flowers,
I stop to hear the birds.
I surrender. I surrender.

Darkness holds a strange allure,
as all the pretty flowers know,
and all the flitting birds attest,
darkness holds a sweet allure,
and brings us back.
It takes us back.

Darkness kindly hides the face
from watchful eyes, from judging eyes.
It hides all works of good or ill,
until light comes again.
And at the dawn I raise my hands,
and I surrender once again.

Light is such a lovely thing,
it shows the trees, it shows the stream,
and all the pretty flowers,
all the flitting birds,
all the people's hungry faces,
all the people's greedy faces
that darkness tries to hide.

But isn't it pathetic? Isn't it obscene?
I think it is indecent in the extreme
that people hide in darkness,
and let the flowers grow.
Hide away the beauty
so the evil doesn't show.

Darkness is a pretty veil,
but something better's there..
so I raise my hands in sweet surrender,
await the dawn and sing:
"I await a better day,
a precious day,
a prayerful day.
I await a better day,
and I shall fight no more."

So come ye, come ye unto light,
and drop your swords,
and hide no longer.
Patient waits the day.
©2008-2009 ~Cayden
:iconcayden:

Author's Comments

It's been forever since I've submitted a deviation. I've been feeling like talking in riddles lately, and I know at least one of you will entirely understand this.

I hope I'm not too rusty after my time away!

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:iconincubustrav421:
This is truly an illusionary poem. A curtain call to what we see and what we hide. Is truth here or can it be behind. Love the imagery with they winding diction. Great job :)

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:iconcayden:
You understood this poem very well, great! Thank you for the kind and well worded comments, the favorite, and the deviant watch.

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All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

:angered: :rage: :sarcasm: :lick: :X :evillaugh: =| :) :innocent: :police: :w00t: :dead: :spammer: :aww: :sing: :( :faint: :laughing: :ohmygod: :saddrunk: :tunes: :ninja: :sleep: :drunk: :spot:
:iconsavvy23:
Wow! how beautiful! I love your poetry!
:iconcayden:
Aww thank you so much! I had fun writing that one, though I did it really quickly. Thank you for the favorite :)

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All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

:angered: :rage: :sarcasm: :lick: :X :evillaugh: =| :) :innocent: :police: :w00t: :dead: :spammer: :aww: :sing: :( :faint: :laughing: :ohmygod: :saddrunk: :tunes: :ninja: :sleep: :drunk: :spot:
:iconstatus-foe:
RUSSSTTTTTYYYYY!!!!!!! D:

jk,jk. :D

its was good i liked it. ^^

--
-*Chained to reality, but escaped to fantasy.*-
:iconcayden:
You owe me a fav for the rudeness!!!! jk

I'm glad you liked it Statty *Tackles*

--
All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

:angered: :rage: :sarcasm: :lick: :X :evillaugh: =| :) :innocent: :police: :w00t: :dead: :spammer: :aww: :sing: :( :faint: :laughing: :ohmygod: :saddrunk: :tunes: :ninja: :sleep: :drunk: :spot:
:iconstatus-foe:
D8 what?!

X3 nuuu!!!

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-*Chained to reality, but escaped to fantasy.*-
:iconsavvy23:
of course! I loved it! :heart: You get so much truth in your poetry. I just love it!:)
:iconcayden:
See, when you leave a rude comment on my piece, you have to favorite or evil monsters will attack you! idk..

OH YES! *is tackling* *Eats a burger* *resumes tackling* :)

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All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

:angered: :rage: :sarcasm: :lick: :X :evillaugh: =| :) :innocent: :police: :w00t: :dead: :spammer: :aww: :sing: :( :faint: :laughing: :ohmygod: :saddrunk: :tunes: :ninja: :sleep: :drunk: :spot:

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