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Hear my prayer o'er the wilderness,
on this night of great importance,
give me rest, please give me rest I pray...

May your brother Death not take me,
your mother Earth protect me
I pray...
The prayer of angels
that when all is done
we may have rest,
and sweet, sweet dreams.

And when all is said and done,
when all our swords are stayed,
may I have rest?

Protect my wife, my children
as mother Earth protects me,
you have children too, you too should know
the fear I'm keeping.

May your brother Death not take me,
your mother Earth protect me
I pray...
The prayer of angels.

Keep away the shadows,
forgive my breaking heart.
And give me rest
And give me peace
And spare me Death.

May your mother Earth protect me,
And brother Death avoid me,
Protect my wife and children
while I am away.
©2008-2009 ~Cayden
:iconcayden:

Author's Comments

"An' I saw a thousand men to our one hundred, an' I set down my sword and knelt before the moon, and before the Almighty, and let out a howl.

The men around me fell to their knees, an' we all began to pray."


This isn't my best work. Definitely not, nor was it intended to be. A while back, I started up a collection of Battle Themes. This one is "The Prayer"

Perhaps you've noticed that we do not always pray sensibly, especially not when we are fearful. That was, in a sense, the mood I was trying to capture.

I will scrap this eventually.

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:icongraphitemonsta:
i like it! it's very heart felt and sincere

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how can you see through my eyes like open doors
leading you down into my core
where I’ve become so numb...
~Evanescence~
:iconcayden:
Do you? Well thank you very much! I'm so tired today that I can't stand it. I want to write a Sonnet for one of my friends, and a quatrain for another, but I'm too tired to even start :(

Did you get my notes? There are three you haven't received.

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All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

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:icongraphitemonsta:
really? i thought i got them all!?!?

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how can you see through my eyes like open doors
leading you down into my core
where I’ve become so numb...
~Evanescence~
:iconcayden:
Hmm...there's one from yesterday that you haven't looked at. (it shows when you go to "sent messages") So...I don't think it was an important one *shrugs*

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All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

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:iconas-she-said-yes:
i like it it's still really good no matter what you say it is.

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:butterflytwo: headstrong i'll take you on.
:iconcayden:
Thank you very much :) I just wasn't too fond of it.

--
All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

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:iconas-she-said-yes:
But i am! ^____________^

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:butterflytwo: headstrong i'll take you on.
:iconincubustrav421:
A heartfelt sensation breaks the mold here, and brings out a willingness to ask and believe. Good Job.

- ... out
:iconcayden:
I thank you kindly for that. It felt very rushed, jumbled, and terribly repetitive, even though those were feelings I was going for. I hope to go back to tradition soon.

--
All humans are roses, and all roses have thorns

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